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Critiques
There are a few things I could recommend but they are mainly points on style. Like the over/under could have a bit more contrast between the black lines and grey fill. Lightening the grey and thickening the lines would help in that regard. Also as a matter of style, if you cut and splice the ribbons in the right places you could probably get the entire piece to be one ribbon. Currently each separate ribbon (wings, torso, and antenna) doesn't have any intertwined knots inside so it'd be simple to redo and make the entire piece look more whole.
You have done a great job filling the space so that even without outside influence or color, you recognize the shape. I started knotwork with boring squares... so design wise, this is solid.
While I've been meaning to upload my own tutorial (I'd curse procrastination but that can wait) I might finally get around to some basics now that my 1000 cranes is mostly finished. Beyond that, I remember one reason you started watching me was because of my knotwork so if you ever would like to bounce ideas off me or would like more tutoring than basics, feel free to ask. It's the least I can do for all the comments and favs you've given me.
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